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I shouldn't be alone at night,
Though I'm eightteen,
A ten foot terror stalks me,
But only in my dreams,
His arms wide as if to hold me,
And suddenly I feel safe,
But I know if i go to him,
What will kill me is his embrace,
A fine tailored suit,
And long fingers spread,
Just the thought of him,
Fills my heart with dread,
I heard the stories when I was a child,
How he had no mercy mild,
I saw the videos on tv,
And when I die i know he will be the last thing I see,
Creeping through the house at night,
He watches as I sleep,
Daring me to wake,
Daring me to scream,
If I embrace him,
My soul will not remain,
If I give into the fear,
I will surely go insane,
He does not love me,
Nor does he care,
His faceless head mocking me,
As I lie in my despair,
A knife in hand I wander,
Into the livingroom for a rest,
And take the knife I lay it to my breast,
And then I see him in the window,
Clear and larger then life,
Then plunging into my heart,
My body made a sheath for my knife,
For suicide in hell i'd rather be damned,
Then have my life taken,
By The Slender Man.
the slender man 0.0
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Theoverlord234 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
god damn badass and dramatic and dark and AAAHHH JHSDGFREJFGJERBVREUKG......

''slender man took me''
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littlemisslockheart Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
Whoa! Super creepy and well done!!! 👌
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:iconjaimeenator123:
Jaimeenator123 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
THIS AMAZING AND ACCURATE OMG!
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MarioLuigiBellaBase Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Whoah. Nice.
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cocowolfdragon Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student
OMFG awesome sauce!!
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slenderchild13 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Can you give this to me its awesome
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cinnamonlover12230 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
 take out the bad words and replace them with these heaven messed up
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Jertulius Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this is awesome. keep up the good work!
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:iconcloverena:
Cloverena Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
O MA GOSH!

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Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohmygod this is awesome! :D I've read it like 5 times already. XD
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DbzBrandon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I also have a Slenderman story. I'm working on part 2 right now. 
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Aqua311 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
One question.

How do you know he won't be waiting for you in Hell?
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Theoverlord234 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
no he isn't a demon. in fact one of his enemies is like a demon: Zalgo. if Zalgo was a true demon, he would  worse tan the devil himself. he tortures your soul by making you paranoid and go insane with his 7 mouths each talking a different demonic language. his 7th one doesn't talk though, it sings the song of the end of the world. in some stories, slender actually tries to stop him. so he isn't exactly all that bad. he's just like an animal trying to survive by eating souls.
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magaflame97 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
he's not a demon so he can't be waiting there. But if he is, then he won't be an official one and (I can't remember if there is a Demon such as one) he would be the demon of fear
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LuckyNoble Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
now that I've read this poem.... I always look threw my window XD
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XTeara Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Artist
That....


was creepy yet intriguing 

great job!
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angeldevil12345 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's really good
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shutupandeatpie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is so amazing I am a dummy! 
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enewport Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing. 
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FluffyMcFluffypants Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
fabulous darling fabulous *says this in the stereotypical fashion designer guy voice

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TheNR2M Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha XD yeah... :')

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FluffyMcFluffypants Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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kickbutt150 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
you will not be bothered if you show no fear
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VariaGuardians Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Artist
 Wow  it's awesome
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mmysterymachine Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
amazing!!!
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shadowwolf266 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student
well done i like it plz do more
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THAT WAS....... AMAZING!!!!!!! YOU ARE AWESOME AT WRITING POEMS!!!
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CelticBlood Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Writer
Omg thank you so much!
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Ianasan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
0_0
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Hellsprincess013 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student General Artist
deep and beautiful. well done
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quantumuniverseX8 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Awesome!!!
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RainbowNinjaGuardian Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope that what happens to his victims isn't painful. He's after me, and I'm too scared for suicide. O_O (No one believes me!)
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TheDoctorwholived Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe you!
You should :sprint:!
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RainbowNinjaGuardian Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't run! This place is like a cage! I just hope it doesn't follow me to Yosemite. :(
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PewdiepieBroForEver Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
Omg this is soooo goood!!
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fluffybunny98 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gah I can't find the fav button
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Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Is it a girl who comits suicide in the poem? Anyway this is just... wow! I love it and I love slenderman! But only as a friend. I mean why do people say bad things about him? He could just be looking for a friend!
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CelticBlood Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Writer
yes the girl feels like she is about to be captured by slendy and kills herself. thank you for reading!
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Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Your welcome!
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0The0Slender0Man0 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is good very good...
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distraughthallelujah Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is... incredible. Really. And... dark. And incredible. O.O
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Blackblossom659 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is very good.
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TwilightKira27 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student General Artist
O.o, wow
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SilverMary42 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
o.o love
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21-Butterflies Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Well written. Nice words and metaphors. :)
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vampiregirl8759 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Artist
i do not belive that slender is evil. i truely belive all he wants is a friend and love. he isnt evil, he's a lone. he's not horrifying, he's misunderstood. he's not a villan, he's my friend...
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AsktheSlenders Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We are very glad you feel that way, dear.
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:iconvampiregirl8759:
vampiregirl8759 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
<3 thank you
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AsktheSlenders Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course
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Dddddddd5 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
I'm not alone :D
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