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I shouldn't be alone at night,
Though I'm eightteen,
A ten foot terror stalks me,
But only in my dreams,
His arms wide as if to hold me,
And suddenly I feel safe,
But I know if i go to him,
What will kill me is his embrace,
A fine tailored suit,
And long fingers spread,
Just the thought of him,
Fills my heart with dread,
I heard the stories when I was a child,
How he had no mercy mild,
I saw the videos on tv,
And when I die i know he will be the last thing I see,
Creeping through the house at night,
He watches as I sleep,
Daring me to wake,
Daring me to scream,
If I embrace him,
My soul will not remain,
If I give into the fear,
I will surely go insane,
He does not love me,
Nor does he care,
His faceless head mocking me,
As I lie in my despair,
A knife in hand I wander,
Into the livingroom for a rest,
And take the knife I lay it to my breast,
And then I see him in the window,
Clear and larger then life,
Then plunging into my heart,
My body made a sheath for my knife,
For suicide in hell i'd rather be damned,
Then have my life taken,
By The Slender Man.
the slender man 0.0
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:iconmarioluigibellabase:
MarioLuigiBellaBase Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
Whoah. Nice.
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cocowolfdragon Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student
OMFG awesome sauce!!
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slenderchild13 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Can you give this to me its awesome
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cinnamonlover12230 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
 take out the bad words and replace them with these heaven messed up
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Jertulius Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this is awesome. keep up the good work!
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Cloverena Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
O MA GOSH!

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:iconbluestarfirejay:
Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohmygod this is awesome! :D I've read it like 5 times already. XD
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DbzBrandon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I also have a Slenderman story. I'm working on part 2 right now. 
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:iconaqua311:
Aqua311 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
One question.

How do you know he won't be waiting for you in Hell?
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:iconmagaflame97:
magaflame97 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
he's not a demon so he can't be waiting there. But if he is, then he won't be an official one and (I can't remember if there is a Demon such as one) he would be the demon of fear
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LuckyNoble Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
now that I've read this poem.... I always look threw my window XD
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:iconxteara:
XTeara Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Artist
That....


was creepy yet intriguing 

great job!
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:iconangeldevil12345:
angeldevil12345 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's really good
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shutupandeatpie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is so amazing I am a dummy! 
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:iconenewport:
enewport Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing. 
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FluffyMcFluffypants Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
fabulous darling fabulous *says this in the stereotypical fashion designer guy voice

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:iconthenr2m:
TheNR2M Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha XD yeah... :')

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:iconfluffymcfluffypants:
FluffyMcFluffypants Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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kickbutt150 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
you will not be bothered if you show no fear
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:iconvariaguardians:
VariaGuardians Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Artist
 Wow  it's awesome
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:iconmmysterymachine:
mmysterymachine Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
amazing!!!
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shadowwolf266 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student
well done i like it plz do more
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:iconslendermanthearrival:
THAT WAS....... AMAZING!!!!!!! YOU ARE AWESOME AT WRITING POEMS!!!
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:iconcelticblood:
CelticBlood Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Writer
Omg thank you so much!
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Ianasan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
0_0
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Hellsprincess013 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student General Artist
deep and beautiful. well done
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quantumuniverseX8 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Awesome!!!
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:iconrainbowninjaguardian:
RainbowNinjaGuardian Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope that what happens to his victims isn't painful. He's after me, and I'm too scared for suicide. O_O (No one believes me!)
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TheDoctorwholived Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe you!
You should :sprint:!
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:iconrainbowninjaguardian:
RainbowNinjaGuardian Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't run! This place is like a cage! I just hope it doesn't follow me to Yosemite. :(
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PewdiepieBroForEver Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
Omg this is soooo goood!!
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fluffybunny98 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gah I can't find the fav button
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Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Is it a girl who comits suicide in the poem? Anyway this is just... wow! I love it and I love slenderman! But only as a friend. I mean why do people say bad things about him? He could just be looking for a friend!
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CelticBlood Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Writer
yes the girl feels like she is about to be captured by slendy and kills herself. thank you for reading!
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Nightshade-warroir Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Your welcome!
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0The0Slender0Man0 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is good very good...
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distraughthallelujah Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is... incredible. Really. And... dark. And incredible. O.O
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Blackblossom659 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is very good.
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:icontwilightkira27:
TwilightKira27 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student General Artist
O.o, wow
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SilverMary42 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
o.o love
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21-Butterflies Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Well written. Nice words and metaphors. :)
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vampiregirl8759 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Artist
i do not belive that slender is evil. i truely belive all he wants is a friend and love. he isnt evil, he's a lone. he's not horrifying, he's misunderstood. he's not a villan, he's my friend...
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AsktheSlenders Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We are very glad you feel that way, dear.
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:iconvampiregirl8759:
vampiregirl8759 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
<3 thank you
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:iconasktheslenders:
AsktheSlenders Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course
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Dddddddd5 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
I'm not alone :D
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pkpowagirl Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I feel the same way
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:iconletolover6277:
LetoLover6277 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
what if Slendy just wants some love? i am aware of the stories, some joke and say his motive is he wants $20, others (like my friend and i) imagine him just wanting a friend
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Doug-Rattmann Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
OH GOD that kinda scared me ;p Great work!
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zatr123456 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
love it and i'm lisen to slender man song
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